JoSilver's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mim (v.3)]

Her design is brillant. I am utter enammered with her hair. There so much volume and layers to it all with just two cards making up the back.

Just all the little details really come together.

Excellent work.

[my liminal dreams]

I like this image a lot but I think something that would make this image shine is if the wall and ceiling had water cautics effects.

[i'm falling]

As a piece it's a bit striking if a bit uninspired. This motif is a bit cliche, not ineffective but more like ineffective on its own. Not bad but, I'd like to see more of a spin on the concept. Like what are they falling into or falling from. The image alone gives me nothing about that. The render itself is fine if a bit simple, I'm not a fan of how textureless the subject is. Looks like a pastic army man sinking to the bottom of a toilet. The volumetric lighting looks great.

Overall not bad but needs more... anything.

[It just HAD to be a monday]

Goodness me, your art is just fantastic!

[requests]

The thrid on is my favorite. The juxtaposition of the otherwise friendly and wellcoming pose with the nightmareish face and colors.

Excellent work.

[Me and the boys]

Be and the boys playing roblox!

[For Breonna Taylor]

I really like this piece. It's an excellent memorial to her memory.

TreasurePlanet responds:

thank you!!! : )))

[Woten DX - Traveller's Dream [CHARACTER ART 02]]

Oof, She is a cutey!

[Scrapface]

Woo momma, that pretty terifying.

[Jane]

Nice, work. Just one thing that bugs me. The skin is a bit too translucent. I say SSS is best used subtley. Just enough to notice but not so much that everything looks like jelly. Also the eyes are a bit dull, very doll like. I'm gonna take a wild guess and say you only a sun lamp to light the scene. Try adding a few extra lights in the scene to play around with shadow and highlights might really help the eyes.

Other than everything fantastic.

ravensoulsp responds:

Thank you so much for your feedback! About the light, I used three light sources. I must have picked the wrong location.