JoSilver's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[CREEPY DEEPY]

Not bad but there are a few anatomy errors. The breast need to hang down no matter how perky they are, otherwise they appear to be one solid mass. Doing so create a sense of weight and volume, heck, large breasts can weigh about 10 pounds each. Also the right side of the hip is too low, I understand that her leg is out and it would cause the waist to pivot but the whole mid section need to tilt and the upper body needs to tilt to the other side to compensate for the uneven weight distribution. Also she has no collar bone.

A good practice when starting an image is to rough out the skeleton, do a figure sketch, it's important to capture the correct action of the subject first. It's important understand how each joint connect to each other and most important of all know where the spine is, If you can't tell how the spine runs down the body the entire image is lost.

SileNt-Sam responds:

thanks a lot man :) i'll remember that next time ^^

[Kate]

There are some nice details, everything has a nice even gradient to it and sharp lines. However it lacks some depth, there are very few dark zones, only highlights. For instance her legs should be in partial shadow but in general darker then then the upper body. It could really make the overall image really pop.

As a whole, it's nice but it's missing something.

SileNt-Sam responds:

yeah i knew something is missing >.< maybe some shadows like you said ..
thanks man i really appreciate it :)

[Amazon]

She looks like she could crush somes skull with her thighs... for perhaps a pelvis.

[Fallout Adventure Time]

Ooo about 800 years ago.

deathink responds:

indeed!

[Brak]

HELLO, EVERYBODY! HELLO, EVERYBODY! WOO-HOO-HOOOO! HELLO, EVERYBODY, IT'S TIME FOR CARTOON PLANET!

[Nami]

Well, due to the way her shoulders are oriented it looks as if she has three arms and one is coming out of her neck. Her chest should be rolled toward the view her right obscured from view. When drawing be sure you know where the character's spine is helps avoid errors such as that. Also her arms are far too tube like and the elbows are far too round.

It's not terrible, it just needs work. Keep Practicing.

[Ms. Dairy]

She looks structurally unstable If you know what I mean!

[SpeedoSausage]

Beefcake!