There are some nice details, everything has a nice even gradient to it and sharp lines. However it lacks some depth, there are very few dark zones, only highlights. For instance her legs should be in partial shadow but in general darker then then the upper body. It could really make the overall image really pop.
As a whole, it's nice but it's missing something.
yeah i knew something is missing >.< maybe some shadows like you said ..
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She looks like she could crush somes skull with her thighs... for perhaps a pelvis.
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Well, due to the way her shoulders are oriented it looks as if she has three arms and one is coming out of her neck. Her chest should be rolled toward the view her right obscured from view. When drawing be sure you know where the character's spine is helps avoid errors such as that. Also her arms are far too tube like and the elbows are far too round.
It's not terrible, it just needs work. Keep Practicing.
She looks structurally unstable If you know what I mean!
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