JoSilver's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[savory 26]

I dont know why but I just love this peice.

[TO THE STARS]

Not bad but a few things are bugging me about this image. I can't really tell if she's standing up or laying back. The whole mood of this piece makes me think she's suppose to standing. If she is standing, I dont know about you but I cant hold that pose for more than two seconds. Since her legs are spread apart she would fall over immediately.

But then I see her hand and it looks like she might be pressing against the floor. But if she is on the floor, she looks like she looking up rather the down at some standing over her, which suggest to me she's standing.

It not bad and like it but the pose is very ambiguious. I'd work on it a bit more if were you.

Derp7oSoup responds:

lol its obvious as to what it is, i mean why else would she be standing lol.

[Dva but patreon only]

Don't get me wrong we all gotta make money, but why even post this if a good two thirds is a pateron logo!

I wouldn't even be so upset if you just censored it with black bars. And honestly i can't tell if this worth my two dollars. The parts I can see look fairly mediocre to me. I can't even be frustates that it's censored because i can't even know what I not seeing in full! Give people a reason to pay you.

Since this bascially just an ad for you patreon, my crtic is that if anything it make want to take money from you out of spite. That how tasteless it is.

Honestly though dude, it my personal opion that you should try to offer people more for their money rather than make them feel as if they have to pay to even see your work at all. You'll get less people ranting about you advertizing you patreon thats for sure.

olightsword responds:

Okay fine but to fair i didnt censor this look at my other post my friend censor this ans said this how u get more money so i posted and we as u can see not much, i just post no logo pic im sorry

[ff7]

Not sure who THICCer, Tifa or Barret.

[watermelon toob top.]

She's a robo-cutey!

[Surf the Web]

She looks just like me when I stumble upon this gem

[Burger Bulborb]

He thought he could live his whole life with out ever answering for his crimes. Well the tables have turned now Mr. Bulborb!

[ok]

BLESS

[Antina [Gift art for Frootcubes]]

OMG SHE'S ADOWABLE!

[Minecraft Villager]

Not a bad sculpt.... But also not that great. Main issue are small bits in the anatomy. A good place is the neck, He's basically all trapezius muscle. Now some bigger guys can basically look like the have no neck but they do, the problem is made worst with the lack of a collar bone, It looks like his body is just entirely a squwat pear shape below his head. Also the underside of his cheek bones seem concave, you can feel on your own face that that are is really quite fleshy, given the overall shape of his face his cheek bones would not be very prominent. I feel like the eyebrows are not thick enough and it doesn't seem to be because of how much hair their is I think it's because they just stick out making them seem thinner but I can't really tell.

Now their are a lot of good details in this model and I like it but, But I feel the Anatomy needs work. Even when working on stylized characters having a strong anatomical justification for a style choice make for a much better design.

After that Never underestimate the importance of good lighting. It looks to me that you are using just a single key light and nothing else to light the model with sky lighting filling out the rest. That's functional but not ever appealing.