JoSilver's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Jane]

Nice, work. Just one thing that bugs me. The skin is a bit too translucent. I say SSS is best used subtley. Just enough to notice but not so much that everything looks like jelly. Also the eyes are a bit dull, very doll like. I'm gonna take a wild guess and say you only a sun lamp to light the scene. Try adding a few extra lights in the scene to play around with shadow and highlights might really help the eyes.

Other than everything fantastic.

ravensoulsp responds:

Thank you so much for your feedback! About the light, I used three light sources. I must have picked the wrong location.

[trust nobody]

HA!

[ah you're awake!]

You're sweating on my open WOUNDS!

[[RETRO] Ada Wong [RESIDENT EVIL]]

Fuck me ticket or Rocket Launcher ticket... Not an easy decision.

[Demoman]

'And if you think you're better than me, you got another thing coming..."

[Gusano]

Come and join the conglomeration! It's beautiful here!

[Little Friends]

Unsettling.

[Pauline | Super Mario Odyssey]

Over all this is a really nice peice, However her neck is a bit off. The front of her neck is concave but that really doesn't make sense anatomically. I found this image that really illustrates the problem.

https://redefinehealthcare.com/wp-content/uploads/2019/10/muscle-spasms-in-the-neck.jpg

as you can see that tendon that creates that distinctive "V" in the neck wraps around the neck from the center of the colar bone up to the ear so the over all curvature of the neck is not broken by them.

This is tricky to get right seeing how thin her neck is but the tendon the bright side of the neck would probally not visible because it wraps around the neck and out of view.

Other that I like it, I love you're use of colors.

Hope to see more.

Twisted4000 responds:

Thank you for pointing that out, I didn't even notice that. I get so damn excited when I believe the drawing's almost done and I always miss these errors lmao. I did a quick patch job on her neck and I think it's a bit better now

[Cool girl with cool pant]

Those are some killer pants... Probably literately.

[Kaia]

She's got it where it counts.