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[Noa Line Work]

HOLY MACAROINI!

Can't wait to see the finished version! :D

Very Cool!

PinkPigtails responds:

thank you^^ Ive been working on this drawing for EVER! So I hope to have it done in the next week or so.

[Roxas]

Needs work.

Well fist of all he looks like he's floating above image despite there being a shadow. The background doesn't make any sense, there no distortion on it to indicate depth. Now the body is OK except for the face and hand with the orb.

The hand looks weird, the fingers are to low and too short compared to the index finger and thumb.

For the head he doesn't have any indention indicating the cheek bones which looks very weird since you gave his chin so much detailed and were is the other eye? Also the jaw line doesn't make sense with the angle of his head and the overall shape of it. and I think the ear is too small.

Other then that the shading and colors on him are very nice but sadly the same can not be said about the background as you left it flat and textureless.

You got a lot to work on but there is potential there, just keep practicing and you'll get better in no time.

Sorry, Hentai-Foundry's approval process put me in anatomy whore mode.

CurlyWeirdo responds:

WATEVER...-____-"

But thanks 4 coming that up this is my first time making a 3d artwork,so i already it will probably suck...a LOT...and also i think the backround sucked bec. i didnt hav any tablet and hav no idea wat the backround will be *its kind of random*...BTW thanks for the review...

[Out of the Dusk]

Very Cool.

It's wonderful, very nice use color. I wish I could paint... but I suck at that.

It looks like a cross between Bladerunner and the Matrix. :D

ImpendingRiot responds:

Thanks man. Those were definitely inspirations :)

[Zafina of Eden IV]

Very Nice Character.

Very Nice shape, costume and shading but her eyes... They look dead.
They don't seem to be look at anything in particular which really ruins the picture.
It looks more like a statue than something that's alive.

If you fix that It'd be perfect.

DragonPunch responds:

Okay, thanks!

[Ode to Meowth (not finished)]

It's looking good so far...

But I really think you should finish it first before submit it or at lest exclude it from the portal.

Well it's looking nice so far. so keep it up then and do finish it.

xxxrifrafxxx responds:

I figured I'd go ahead and post it to the portal, just cause I still haven't technically finished it. But I think it looks pretty cool as is.

[Momma Purrloin]

Aww, Cute.

Very Nice picture.

What the hecka a 'Purrloin'... AND WHERES MUH PIKACHU!

xxxrifrafxxx responds:

gen 5 pkmn lol. black and white version. i have black and i just beat all the gym leaders!! whoo

[The best worst videogame shirt]

NOO!!!!

WHY WOULD RIDLEY EVER!!!!

It's nice though.

Your thumbnail is pretty poorly placed, whether or not that was intentional I don't know but it really doesn't build curiosity.

Only clicked it cause it was the most recent submission.

popyea responds:

okay i'll change the thumbnail 2 build curiosities

[Rita Jacobs]

Very Nice.

I like her eyes, they're very piercing and match the face well.

Not bad at all I say.

Industrial-Soup responds:

Thank you so much :)

[Sailor Draco and Cinder]

It's alright.

But it's lacking a bit of shape to me, primarily on her rib cage and neck if you ask me. It's need a slight curve to so she doesn't look like a board.

Also it missing some shading on the dog's (wolf's) head it looks flat compared to the rest of the body.

Also I'm not too crazy about the gradients on the text.

And the background is too dark around the bottom... I think I'd look better if the flame were in front of them and faded up.

Those are my thoughts but other than that I think it looks good.

KittyKat87 responds:

First and foremost, thank you very much for taking the time to review my picture! Much appreciated. ^_^

Now, as for your comments: I think understand what you're saying. I'll try to fix that, but to be honest, the Sailor Scouts' torsos usually aren't defined anymore than how I have it now, (at least, not that I've ever seen) so I'm not sure what more needs to be done.

I'll work on the shading on the wolf's head, but again I'm not really sure where it needs more shading, so... we'll see what happens, lol.

The text... eh, I wasn't crazy-happy with it either, so it'll probably get tweaked sometime.

While I kinda agree about the background being a bit dark at the bottom, I'd rather not put the flames in front of them. I want the focus to be on the characters, after all, not the background, which is why it's faded the way it is. =P Just my way of thinking, though.

Thank you again for the comment, I really do appreciate the constructive criticism and I'm glad you like the picture! =D

[She-Death]

Cool.

Other than the face (Which looks a bit off) it's very nice. A good use of cross-hatching. I absolutely love working with ink so I can really 'dig' this! (not sure what that means)

Nice job.

hidden-lizard responds:

Haha thanks.. I don't really like Crosshatching, but in all honesty.. That IS my shading style lol. Thanks for the Review.