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Not bad, however.

There is something incredibly wrong with the hips. When I first saw it I wasn't quite sure what it was that was wrong, that's who weird it was. The bone structure it just awful there. I have no idea where her naughty bits might be. At first I though there was a cloth there but it turns out that's a shadow. the groan it just way to high up and that indent on the right leg... I don't even know that that is suppose to be!

It seems your coloring skills are alright but you're anatomy is just awful.

work on that.

Rennis5 responds:

this was done from a photo, so the anatomy is correct apart from the groin area,
(not that you could see anything anyway) but i didn't draw anything there,
as that area was supossed to be a little bit darker so you cannot see anything at all

While I can sympathize, I can not agree.

Personally I like this piece, it's funny and partially true. While I can not agree with anyone who attacks an artist based on their work rather then criticize their work I do however feel your art is... bad. I feel it lacks real personality and style. You seem to draw in a crappy anime style coupled with a rather poor grasp of anatomy, coloring and perspective. I honestly though you were 14 or 15 when I was going through your gallery only to find that your userpage says your 27.

My advice to you is stop with the anime style, it's just not working for you, for now anyways. In order for you to improve you need to practice the very basics. I would suggest you take an art class of some sort just to get you out of your element or just start drawing things you wouldn't normally draw. Draw some flowers, passers-by, a can of soup anything. You need to explore your world through art.

I personally believe that your art should be nothing more then your interpretation of what you find most interesting about somethings form and shape, its color, how it moves, and all of it's physical characteristics. Photo-realism has nothing to do with it but surely it requires great deal of skill, discipline and a keen ability to observe in order to achive that level of mastery. I feel you art does not really express anything about you. A picture is only worth a thousand words if the picture was founded on message and I use this piece as an example of a well founded image. You may disagree with that and I cannot argue with anything you might say to defend your work and what it says about you, it's your art and that who it should matter most to.

But I will say your art has never really evolved in any meaningful way. You seem to draw the same thing over and over again and never seem to challenge yourself too much. I do not claim to be a great artist but I always try to do something new and I pick at every detail, maybe not while I work but certainly after it's all said and done. Often I look at my work and just think it's just all terrible. You can never stop improving but you can settle and that is something you should never do.

I would suggest for no that you do things that are simple. Pick up a pencil and draw on a napkin. I feel you're trying to run without having first learned how to properly stand up tall. If you wish to improve or receive approval from you peers you must really consider reinventing yourself, if anyone thinks what you're doing is wrong then there must be a bit of truth to it even if you can't see it. You must probe it to find out why even if you don't like what you find. When the good out weights the bad is when you can ignore the bad, but should you really?

I leave you with a question, not that I want an answer to it, but rather to give you a thought to consider.

Do you think your art is good?

Rennis5 responds:

i get what you mean and you do have some good points and some pointless comments, first of all age has nothing to do with anything but i like the idea of thinking outside the box and getting a fresh perspective, it has been a long time since i havn't used my tablet to draw something so that probably is a bad thing.
i think i just need to sort out my process a bit better and stop being so impatient,

but this is all kind of off the subject, you'r just talking about my art, i didn't draw this picture because i was offeneded about my art being attacked, i see it on other peoples art too, so i always click the 5 to kill the 0

and yeah, i like most of my art coz some of them are a lot harder to make then what some people realise and the harder ones have some meaning to me
but in general i would say that my art isn't great but i think my art is decent for the effort i put into it and i'm happy with some of them and others i'm not too happy with

I have Priapism

So nothing can kill my Boner.... NOTHING!

Sethdd responds:

MY GAWD! THAT CANT BE POSSIBLE! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOooooooooo...

HOLY MACAROINI!

Can't wait to see the finished version! :D

Very Cool!

PinkPigtails responds:

thank you^^ Ive been working on this drawing for EVER! So I hope to have it done in the next week or so.

lol.

Well that was certainly something!

BmacDelete responds:

it was nothing, really.

Needs work.

Well fist of all he looks like he's floating above image despite there being a shadow. The background doesn't make any sense, there no distortion on it to indicate depth. Now the body is OK except for the face and hand with the orb.

The hand looks weird, the fingers are to low and too short compared to the index finger and thumb.

For the head he doesn't have any indention indicating the cheek bones which looks very weird since you gave his chin so much detailed and were is the other eye? Also the jaw line doesn't make sense with the angle of his head and the overall shape of it. and I think the ear is too small.

Other then that the shading and colors on him are very nice but sadly the same can not be said about the background as you left it flat and textureless.

You got a lot to work on but there is potential there, just keep practicing and you'll get better in no time.

Sorry, Hentai-Foundry's approval process put me in anatomy whore mode.

CurlyWeirdo responds:

WATEVER...-____-"

But thanks 4 coming that up this is my first time making a 3d artwork,so i already it will probably suck...a LOT...and also i think the backround sucked bec. i didnt hav any tablet and hav no idea wat the backround will be *its kind of random*...BTW thanks for the review...

Very Cool.

It's wonderful, very nice use color. I wish I could paint... but I suck at that.

It looks like a cross between Bladerunner and the Matrix. :D

ImpendingRiot responds:

Thanks man. Those were definitely inspirations :)

Very Nice Character.

Very Nice shape, costume and shading but her eyes... They look dead.
They don't seem to be look at anything in particular which really ruins the picture.
It looks more like a statue than something that's alive.

If you fix that It'd be perfect.

DragonPunch responds:

Okay, thanks!

It's looking good so far...

But I really think you should finish it first before submit it or at lest exclude it from the portal.

Well it's looking nice so far. so keep it up then and do finish it.

xxxrifrafxxx responds:

I figured I'd go ahead and post it to the portal, just cause I still haven't technically finished it. But I think it looks pretty cool as is.

Aww, Cute.

Very Nice picture.

What the hecka a 'Purrloin'... AND WHERES MUH PIKACHU!

xxxrifrafxxx responds:

gen 5 pkmn lol. black and white version. i have black and i just beat all the gym leaders!! whoo

Im a homical Maniac who likes dounuts!

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