JoSilver's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[For Breonna Taylor]

I really like this piece. It's an excellent memorial to her memory.

TreasurePlanet responds:

thank you!!! : )))

[Jane]

Nice, work. Just one thing that bugs me. The skin is a bit too translucent. I say SSS is best used subtley. Just enough to notice but not so much that everything looks like jelly. Also the eyes are a bit dull, very doll like. I'm gonna take a wild guess and say you only a sun lamp to light the scene. Try adding a few extra lights in the scene to play around with shadow and highlights might really help the eyes.

Other than everything fantastic.

ravensoulsp responds:

Thank you so much for your feedback! About the light, I used three light sources. I must have picked the wrong location.

[Pauline | Super Mario Odyssey]

Over all this is a really nice peice, However her neck is a bit off. The front of her neck is concave but that really doesn't make sense anatomically. I found this image that really illustrates the problem.

https://redefinehealthcare.com/wp-content/uploads/2019/10/muscle-spasms-in-the-neck.jpg

as you can see that tendon that creates that distinctive "V" in the neck wraps around the neck from the center of the colar bone up to the ear so the over all curvature of the neck is not broken by them.

This is tricky to get right seeing how thin her neck is but the tendon the bright side of the neck would probally not visible because it wraps around the neck and out of view.

Other that I like it, I love you're use of colors.

Hope to see more.

Twisted4000 responds:

Thank you for pointing that out, I didn't even notice that. I get so damn excited when I believe the drawing's almost done and I always miss these errors lmao. I did a quick patch job on her neck and I think it's a bit better now

[TO THE STARS]

Not bad but a few things are bugging me about this image. I can't really tell if she's standing up or laying back. The whole mood of this piece makes me think she's suppose to standing. If she is standing, I dont know about you but I cant hold that pose for more than two seconds. Since her legs are spread apart she would fall over immediately.

But then I see her hand and it looks like she might be pressing against the floor. But if she is on the floor, she looks like she looking up rather the down at some standing over her, which suggest to me she's standing.

It not bad and like it but the pose is very ambiguious. I'd work on it a bit more if were you.

Derp7oSoup responds:

lol its obvious as to what it is, i mean why else would she be standing lol.

["May I have this dance?"]

IT BELONGS IN THE LOUVRE!

Blankyboi19 responds:

Haha! Thank you very much!

[New Player: Candle]

She's cute but she looks like she smoke cigarettes so my mom says I can't date her.

SamuraiRen responds:

surprisingly accurate

[Puke]

Kill the adorable bastard with fire!

OneGrumpyLumpy responds:

Do you think she'd harden, melt or evaporate

[MerMay: The Siren]

Eh, I'd still do 'er. That's probably the scam but, what am I made of stone?!

BoyPorcelain responds:

fair tbh..

[TV]

I've watched this atleast 31 times.

Potatoman responds:

OH YEAH? 32! Beat that