Well, the face is nice.
But the something about the proportions is off. Well for sure the breast are too high on her chest. The need to be much lower, it just looks weird that way. Also I don't agree with the dress, it's not very flattering on her. It makes her look like a block of wood especially since her shoulders are so square.
It doesn't look bad, the colors and everything is nice... I guess you could say It's just not what I would have done.
Tom's all like....
"Go Get em' PICO!"
Lol Nice job!
Holy FECK!
Now that is just Epic! Probably one of the best Darth Vader Fan arts I've ever seen.
Pat yourself on the back my good friend!.
HOLY MACAROINI!
Can't wait to see the finished version! :D
Very Cool!
thank you^^ Ive been working on this drawing for EVER! So I hope to have it done in the next week or so.
The street of new york...
It's exactly like that! :D
My only problem with this the plain white background, I'd be nice to see exactly is impeding his forward swinging. But other then that Nicely Done!
Needs work.
Well fist of all he looks like he's floating above image despite there being a shadow. The background doesn't make any sense, there no distortion on it to indicate depth. Now the body is OK except for the face and hand with the orb.
The hand looks weird, the fingers are to low and too short compared to the index finger and thumb.
For the head he doesn't have any indention indicating the cheek bones which looks very weird since you gave his chin so much detailed and were is the other eye? Also the jaw line doesn't make sense with the angle of his head and the overall shape of it. and I think the ear is too small.
Other then that the shading and colors on him are very nice but sadly the same can not be said about the background as you left it flat and textureless.
You got a lot to work on but there is potential there, just keep practicing and you'll get better in no time.
Sorry, Hentai-Foundry's approval process put me in anatomy whore mode.
WATEVER...-____-"
But thanks 4 coming that up this is my first time making a 3d artwork,so i already it will probably suck...a LOT...and also i think the backround sucked bec. i didnt hav any tablet and hav no idea wat the backround will be *its kind of random*...BTW thanks for the review...
Very Cool.
It's wonderful, very nice use color. I wish I could paint... but I suck at that.
It looks like a cross between Bladerunner and the Matrix. :D
Thanks man. Those were definitely inspirations :)
Very Nice Character.
Very Nice shape, costume and shading but her eyes... They look dead.
They don't seem to be look at anything in particular which really ruins the picture.
It looks more like a statue than something that's alive.
If you fix that It'd be perfect.
Okay, thanks!
It's looking good so far...
But I really think you should finish it first before submit it or at lest exclude it from the portal.
Well it's looking nice so far. so keep it up then and do finish it.
I figured I'd go ahead and post it to the portal, just cause I still haven't technically finished it. But I think it looks pretty cool as is.
STEP RIGHT UP! ENJOY THE SHOW!
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Game Dev
Brooklyn College
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Newgrounds Sprite guys! 
Vader 
Noa Line Work 
Ultimate Spider-Man 
Roxas 
Out of the Dusk 
Zafina of Eden IV 
Ode to Meowth (not finished) 
