Very nicely done!!!
As I was voting I was torn between giving you a 4 or a 5. I gave you a 5. Even thought the animation isn't the highlight of this flash it was was still well done. I found that the story actually made me care, which is actually really hard to accomplish. I really suggest that you do focus on working on your animation skills but stay on this path. for now the only thing that can be improved is the animation.