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The Dying Thoughts of Jeza (READ IT NOW!)

Posted by JoSilver - October 31st, 2021


HAPPY HALLOWEEN!

Don't come to my house...

NSFW CONTENT AHEAD!


WHAT ARE YOU WAITING FOR!!! READ IT!!! GO!!!


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As always, I'll be making news posts, every two weeks, here on Newgrounds, about what I'm doing, who I'm with and what exactly is that awful smell coming from the basement. Be sure to check in for all the gory details, don't be a stranger now!


Sadly no Project Honey news this week, Next week is gonna be a REAL busy week for me at work so sadly we won't be hearing about it for at least two more weeks. Sorry guys, it really pains me to say that but it's true. As soon as I get the time to really work on the game in earnest, You'll all be the first to know.


The Dying Thoughts of Jeza


The dying thoughts of Jeza is my latest installment in to the on going saga of Luka... Really more like the opening piece, as I've really not done anything truly story related with Luka and all her supple and pliant friends. Really it's more of a testing ground for the tone and atmosphere of the Series as a whole. In general it won't have nearly as much sex, blood and gore... wait, no, I mean it will have exactly that much sex, blood and gore. The tone is really where I laid it on thick, for the most part I don't want Tales of Luka to have such heavy moments but there will be plenty.


It's more or less suppose to be a whimsical fantasy romp, filled with existential dread and the realities of living in a medieval fantasy land. All the good stuff! I wonder If I should continue the series in a similar style, writing with images.


If you guys enjoy the format, well we might just be in business.


Getting it submitted was a process. I wrote the story knowing Newgrounds had a character limit on Art Comentary (12,228 to be exact) so I fit with in that limit... But then I started embedding images. as It happens image embeds count as 40 or so character, in total putting me over by about 600 or so. I had to trim things down some, I ended up cutting a few lines here are there. I really feel like it needs a rewrite to accommodate the changes. On top of just a few things that I feel don't work as well as I though at first.


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Now that's what I call efficient.


I'm kinda of new to writting, or really writting something and submitting it to be critiqued and read. Let me know what you guys think. Even if you hate it let me know why..


Luka's Makeover


Luka has changed a lot since I first even came up with her. She started as a no name attempt at Minecraft lewds ( YOU WIN @SlipperyT ) to what she is today. I won't deny the Minecraft roots of Luka and her world I feel I've really refined the look of everything.



certainly when compared to my original attempts. Honestly not too proud of these. It's like what the he-e-ll was I thinking, guys!



The process of going from her original look to her current one was a long and painful journey. The issue I kept hitting was simple, If I wanted to blood, the guts, the sex, the voilence, It' needed to be somewhat grounded in reality to have an sort of punch! For example a charred and bloody skeleton would have far less of an impact if it looks like a card board box. So I decided I need to make her more grounded, more proportionate to an average human being, even though strictly speaking she's not suppose to be human.


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Left: Old Design, Center: New Design, Right: Realistic Human for reference height.


I re-sculpted the body a wee bit, adjusted the limbs and head a wee bit and also, a Mouth! Presto, she's cooked.Just wish I didn't bash my head in a wall so many times to get here.


Check it out!



Really, I couldn't have done The dying thoughts of Jeza with out making all the changes to characters and the world first. That is entierly because I feel it's finally ready. Luka and her pals are finally a place where I can say, I can do exactly what I want to do without worrying if it will look too goofy or out of place.


But that's will be all for this Halloween, I hope you all enjoy what I've got for you.

See ya'll again soon!


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